May 022011
 

As you might have noticed, it has been some time that I haven’t written a Critique-a-shot column. Indeed, I have been very busy with trips and other stuff going on here in Argentina. I intend to keep it going, but given that the core part of the trip is coming up soon, I’ll decrease the frequency of posting and limit it to one picture by post.

This week’s shot comes from a place which I know pretty well, that is Austin, home of the University of Texas (I studied for a year at its rival university, that is A&M). It is a crazy city, great mix of liberalism and hippy world. It’s famous 6th street is also one of the best place in America to listen to music. Therefore when JB sent me this shot, it brought back many memories of very fun times.

“Southern Gothic” by JB Sigmon


Olympus E-P2 with Panasonic 20mm at F1.7, 1/250, ISO200

Composition

Overall, this is a very good composition. Indeed, most of the members of the band are located in a position that allows a clear read on their expressions. Only the guitarist and the batter are partially hidden. The singer’s head, which is the central point of attraction, follows the rule of thirds. I especially like how the drums connect the left and right part of the picture. The shot has some depth too since JB included 5 different planes in the pictures (the spectators, the singer, the rest of the band, the banner and a small vision of the backstage).
On a less positive note, I am a bit bothered by the big brown hat in the foreground. I wonder if the composition would have worked better if JB had position himself slightly to the left (also allowing a better view on the batter). Finally, it is a detail (yet details count in the quest for perfection), but something got into the field of view in the top right corner.

Aesthetics

JB used a Olympus E-P2 with the Panasonic 20mm 1.7 lens (40mm full frame equivalent). What a great combo when ones wants to travel light and retain good low light capability. I initially thought that the shot was taken in the interior but after closer examination, a view to the sky can be seen in a reflection on the left part of the picture. Light conditions were therefore pretty good to allow for a shot without motion blur, and JB could indeed use a shutter speed of 1/250 at ISO200. These good light conditions also should have allowed a precise and fast focus with the E-P2. Nevertheless, it seems that something went wrong since focus locked on the area where the guitarist is located. The singer therefore resulted slightly off focus, which is ok on a small web image, but will definitely show in a large print. Perhaps JB should have pumped up the ISO’s, reduced the shutter speed by a stop and use a smaller aperture to ensure a larger zone of sharpness.

The color space works perfectly with a good mix of browns, reds, and blues. I’d say it was slightly desaturated, yet it could be an effect of the white balance since choosing the dominant light source must have been tricky. I also like the way the foreground was thrown out of focus, which really gives a sense of immersion into the scene. JB shot at F1.7 to create this effect, which unluckily also contributed to the singer being off focus.
Finally, let’s mention the fabulous facial expressions of the band members. JB really got it all in this shot from the extasis of the guy in the left, the furious grin of the singer, the flying high Kravitz style guitarist and the beautfiful smile of girl connecting with the audience. I would even add that it is the cigarette and expression of the guitarist that makes the whole shot, priceless !

Meaning / Mood / Feeling

The first question that came to my mind when I saw this shot was “Is it street photography ?”. The answer I came up with is yes. Indeed, this shot really gives the impression of a moment in life of JB. He went to an event, and took a snap of a band performing. It was unplanned, unstaged and there is enough elements outside of the band itself to give it a street feel. It is also good in documentary terms, since it really gives a great idea of the spirit of the city of Austin (the music festival sponsored by a high Tech company …). Finally, let’s nonetheless mention the somehow odd title “Southern Gothic”. Indeed I do understand the reference to the South yet I am not sure that gothic is the most appropriate to describe this shot. Maybe I am a bit too stuck with memories of gothic people dressing all in black ;)

Opinion

I love this shot. It has a David LaChapelle feel, almost like everything was staged by the photographer. But it was not and therefore is a great street photography shot. Composition is very sound, colors work perfectly and all characters add to the scene. The main criticism is the singer being slightly off focus, even though I clearly prefer to have the guitarist in focus. He is indeed the real star of this shot. Congrats JB and … Gig’em ;)

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Mar 282011
 

This week, let’s go over two shots from two wonderful cities for street photography, Rome and nearby Buenos Aires.

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“Untitled” by Steven Harrison


Canon 400D with 17-85mm zoom at 35mm, F5.6, 1/260, ISO800

Before I go into the details of the analysis, let me state that dog shots are often tricky. Indeed, a dog will always look good, so in some way that makes this type of pictures quite easy in that regard. Yet at the same time, it is extremely difficult for a dog shot to be more than a nice portrait. Interaction with the surroundings is expected in street photography and making that happen with a dog in not an easy task.

Composition
Steven went for a low vantage point of view and I would even guess that he ended up in his knees. This is great because it puts the viewer at the same level of the dog, or better said, we actually get the vision as a dog would. The choice to cut the human heads emphasizes even more this fact, indeedvdogs see mainly feet when they are in the street, not our cute but stressed faces.  On the topic of depth, the pictures’ three planes ensure that you get that impression and Steven did well in making sure that the legs in the store could be seen. The feet of passer-by’s show movement since they both form triangles. Note that a pair of legs and shoes can be seen on the far right behind the lady carrying the bag. This adds to the feeling of crowded street. I think the dog’s posture and expression is great, and the fact that he is in front of a black area helps make him stand-out. Yet I wonder how the picture would have come out if he had looked in the other direction. I point out this suggestion since the passer-bys all walk from right to left. The dog looking to the right could have therefore been a counter-point to the flow of the picture. Let’s leave that idea aside for the moment, I’ll come back to it. Another great aspect of this picture is the little details, such as the glasses in the man’s hand, the shoes in the upper store window, the feet postures of the two people in the store and the two cigs on the ground. They don’t really add to the meaning of the picture, but it keeps our eyes interested and looking around the frame. Finally, let’s end by a little less positive point which is the framing of the sidewalk border. I would have loved to see the whole sidewalk edge, allowing in some ways to showcase the scene on a sort of special stage.

Aesthetics
Steven set his zoom to the 35mm focal lenght (50mm equivalent on 24×36 format) for this shot and an aperture of F5.6. This was a sound choice since it allowed for a large depth of field, covering all subjects from the passer-by’s to the customers in the back of the store. Note that a smaller aperture could have been even better to make the sidewalk edge a bit more in focus. Thus it would have meant a lower shutter speed and most probably some motion blur due to the proximity of the subjects. The B&W processing is excellent with the right among of contrast. It is somewhat a pity that the woman carried a bright bag since it brings our eyes to that secondary element. This is no big deal though. Finally, I believe Steven added some vignetting to the shot. It does help to surround the action by defining edges, but it might be a bit too strong, especially on the bottom part. I used to add a lot of vignetting to my shots, but I have pretty much stopped. Indeed it always adds a sort of vintage look to the pictures, but in the end, can’t we just assume the period we ive in and leave our nostalgia aside ? ;)

Meaning / Mood / Meaning.
I mentioned the direction of the dog’s head earlier as I believe it is the key element to the understanding of the picture. By looking at the right, the dog follows the flow of the passer-by’s. That leads to the question, are they going somewhere specific or did something special just happen a few meters away ? Probably not, the dog is probably here just looking at the activity going on in front of the store. Had it looked to the right of the picture, a sense of wait would have been induced because of the direction of the traffic and give the idea of a master that left the dog for a while. All in all it doesn’t matter much, the message of the picture is clear which ever whay one wants to interpret it.

Opinion
The first time I looked at this shot, I immediately liked it. It has a mix of both that classic street photography look and a modern setting. The composition is very sound with many nice little details located in all planes. The processing suits perfectly the scene, except maybe for a bit too much vignetting. As for the meaning, several interpretations are possible but since we’ll never be in a dog’s head, it is probably best to leave it that way.

Discover more of Steven’s picture following this link. And don’t forget to check out his dog shots section if you are a fan of the genre.

“Fascinating reading” by Christophe Thillier


Leica M9 with 35mm Cron at F8, 1/60

Composition
The picture is separate in two areas with different light conditions, that is the shade area of the newsstand and the paved street bathed in sunlight. These two elements also from a triangle whose top is occupied by a man reading a magazine. Usually it is recommended that the main subject does not lay in the center of a frame, and it is in this case, yet it does not bother me due to the triangle construction. The street to the right adds depth to the shot by providing an open counterpoint to the barrier impression given by the newsstand.  Maybe a little crop to the left and the bottom part would balance the shot a bit more by taking out some of that large newsstand area. A few sympathetic details can be spotted by looking closer, that is the end of a broom, a woman in swimsuit on the back of the magazine and a whistle-like expression on the face of the man. As for the trash can, like any trash can, city infrastructure planners always seem to place them  in a bad location for street photography. This is proved once more in this shot. This being said, it would have been difficult for Christophe to find a different angle to avoid it and still keep a good composition. Finally, this shot was taken at F8 with 35mm lens on the Leica M9. By doing so, Christopher ensured that all planes were in focus, and I think it was a good decision since there was information on the various planes.

Aesthetics
This kind of scenes with a huge difference in light conditions are always difficult to make work. It is especially true when shooting in colors since the saturation of the colors will vary in the two areas. Nevertheless, I like a lot of the match of the dark reds and green tones, these are colors that always work well together. As for the exposure, and given the scene, this was probably the most logical choice. Yet I am bothered by the over-exposure of the street which is way too bright compared to the reminder of the picture. Perhaps Christophe could try a localized adjustment to tune it down a little. As for the garbage can, sorry to mention it again, it definitely does not help the picture aesthetically, I almost get the feeling that the man, a chair and the trash can are sitting at the same table.

Meaning / mood / feeling
That scene tells a lot about an aspect of life in Argentina. Indeed, people do enjoy a lot the morning breakfast a a coffee. It also illustrates the typical coffee and mineral water combo that is served in all bars. In some ways, this is almost a documentary shot of life in Buenos Aires. Nevertheless, the whistle shape of the lips of the man can hint to a secondary interpretation which is supported by the title of this picture. Indeed, the man is probably enjoying a fascinating reading (or viewing). The swimsuit girl in the back cover adds to that interpretation though it is unclear what the magazine is really about. A good street scene catch by Christophe though I feel he should have gotten closer to show better the relationship between the magazine and the man.

Opinion
I like the composition and the action going on in this shot. Yet it is plagued by two big problems of aesthetics. The first one is the trash can, which was difficult to leave out of the shot, but does harm the action happening around the table. The second one is the over-exposure of the street pavement, though I am sure Christophe could fix it in post processing. Perhaps Christophe could try to crop the shot slightly on the left, bottom and right (to remove part of the trash can) as it would center the action more on the man reading its magazine. I know heavy cropping is not the most elegant way to go about it, but  in this case, I would recommend it. In fact, the underlying point is that  Christophe should have probably gotten closer or used a 50mm focal length for that shot.

Mar 202011
 

This week let’s head to Finland and across the continent to the US.

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“Social Finns” by Eero Lethonen


Leica M8 with 35mm Summaron F2.8 at F4, ISO320

Composition
This must have been a difficult picture to compose. Indeed, lines are horizontal, vertical but also diagonal. They are located on several planes and the space between varies greatly from a few centimeters (fence) to several meters (columns). This creates a very busy frame where one’s look can easily get lost. Hopefully, the two main characters serve as anchors and soon our eyes goes from one to the other. This is further amplified by the two street lamps that echoes their presence. Note that the picture is perfectly right and lines do not converge, which is not always easy to achieve in a setting where our internal horizon line gets easily fooled. There is one detail that bothers me in this composition. Indeed, the head of the girl is overlapping the banner in the back. Indeed, her head mixes with the black of the banner and does not allow to clearly distinguish one from the other. Same effect happens somewhat with the man’s head as it meshes a bit with the bush in the background. To avoid it, Eero could have taken a low angle, yet the shot would have lost some of its depth. Finally, a slight crop to the left and right bottom part of the picture could leave out both of the street lamps that are partially cut. It would also take care of the foreground that is in my opinion a bit too large.

Aesthetics
The exposure is spot on though I wonder if a little over exposure would not have helped show more details on the subjects faces and postures. I like a lot the light generated by the two street lamps. The picture’s color space is quite cold, which probably fits with the mood tha Eero wanted to convey. The aperture used was F4.0 on the 1.3 crop sensor of the Leica M8. Eero should probably stopped down a bit more, to F5.6 or F8.0 as the girl resulted slightly out of focus. Note that he probably would have had to compensate the loss of light with an increase in the ISO.

Message / Mood / Meaning
Given the title of the shot “Social Finns”, Eero did an ironic portray of interaction between Finns in a public place. Yet the picture itself does not portray it very well since this is a scene that probably happens millions of times in our daily life. Why should people be social in a shopping or business center ? And why would Finns behave differently from citizens of other countries ? For a shot like this to work, it should take place in a place where interaction is expected but does not happen. Nothing in this shot makes us expect an interaction. Both people are busy with their stuff and it is normal to do so.

Opinion
This was a complex shot to compose and I think Eero did a good job overall. Some light and depth of field are missing on the subjects to read better their expressions. Where the picture fails is in the message conveyed. There is no interaction between them, nor should any be expected. It is in fact a portray of two people taking a break in a shopping center, which I am not sure is enough to make it relevant for a portray of social relations between Finns.

To discover more of Eero’s work, follow this link to his Flickr photostream.

“Untitled”, by Richard Hankin


Canon Rebel 350D with Ultrasonic 35-135mm

Composition
Though it was shot with on a 3:2 camera, Richard elected to crop his shot to a 1:1 ratio. This choice was probably made to keep all action in a tight area of the picture. Indeed, there are three key elements in the picture which are a man, a street with traffic and a speed limit sign. The 1:1 ratio compresses them in a tight frame and probably took care of excess space on the sides. There is depth in the shot, and the sign in the first plane helps our mind to reconstruct the 3 dimensionality of the shot. That same sign also breaks the picture in two, that is the street on the left and the passer-by on the right. I think it was a good choice to place it in the middle, though it significance is unclear, but I’ll come back to that.

Aesthetics.
The light is nice as well as the color range. Richard mentioned that the lens used was a very old one, and the colors are indeed typical of a vintage lens. There is also some flare on the upper part of the picture which in this case is a welcome addition to the look of the picture. There are some burnt highlights on the street and in the sky. I don’t mind about the ones in the sky as it would have been difficult to avoid due to the high contrast scene. Nevertheless, the burnt highlights on the concrete bother me a bit as it gives a digital look to that part of the picture. This apart, I like the mood of the left part of the picture. What I am less convinced about, is the right part since I find it a bit too dark. Indeed, unless one looks at the feet of the passer-by, it is difficult to see where he is headed. In fact, the whole character is buried in a dark mass which differs too much from the left part of the picture. I do like the shadow drawn on the sidewalk though but would have like it to have it included fully in the frame.

Meaning / mood / feelings
This picture is difficult to understand, mainly because of the passer-by. Not that he should be doing specific but,  be it its body language or the lack of detail does not allow a clear reading on his whereabouts. Another difficult element to interpret is the speed limit sign. Is there a special meaning to it (city limits, slow path of life ?) or is it just place there as a compositional element ? In other words, is the whole scene a simple shot of a moment of life in a city, or did its author want to convey a specific message through the elements located in the frame. I could not come to a conclusion myself.

Opinion
The composition works well, so does the light on the left of the picture, yet he right part of the picture is too contrasty. In turn, it does not allow to interpret the whereabouts of the main character, so the history portrayed in that shot is difficult to understand. Richard did not provide a title or this shot, it could probably help to read it if chosen adequately. I’d also be interested to see the original 3:2 shot and, as famous Walker Evans used to do in his US cityscapes, see if there were more than one way to crop this shot.

PS : Richard sent me the uncropped file after I published this column. In some ways, I do like it better though a position slightly more on the left would have given more depth on the avenue. Note the great light on the windows of the building.

Mar 082011
 

This week, let’s look at two shots from the UK.

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“February Blues” by Christakis Schinis

Leica M9 with 50mm Summilux Asph at F1.4, 1/90, ISO1000

Composition
The scene is composed using the rule of thirds, though many of the lines do actually cross in the center section of the picture. There is a lot of depth in the shot which is always a good thing to preserve the three dimensionality of a scene. Christakis carefully framed since all key elements are well positioned in the frame (sculpture, windows, posts). Neverthless, I am not sure that the main subject was positioned in the best position possible. Indeed the umbrella of the girl finds itself in a middle of a flurry of shapes, be it the post, the windows or the triangle structure hovering over it. Since this is the key element, it bothers me somewhat. Perhaps Christakis should have waited for one more step and the girl would have been located in the middle of a more uniform orange light. It would also probably have helped to better distinguish her silhouette. Finally, take notice that Christakis was able to form a great triangle with the legs of the woman, perfect timing there.

Aesthetics
The lens used for this shot is the marvelous 50mm Summilux Asph, probably one of the very best lens. The shot was taken at F1.4 on a full format sensor, creating the out of focus plane behind the subject. I think Christakis used this aperture because of the low light conditions, and to keep a shutter speed that would still allow for acceptable sharpness. One can clearly identify the plane of sharpness by looking at the pavement. The girl with the umbrella finds herself in that plane so good job on the focusing. Nevertheless, since the girl is located on the dark side of the picture, my eyes get a bit too attracted by the very sharp zone on the lower right end of the picture. This creates a bit of a unbalance in my opinion. This feeling is further increased by the fact the the girl is slightly blurred. Indeed, at 1/90th, motion blur could not have been avoided and it does add a nice movement feeling to the scene. The light itself is gorgeous, though I do feel the shot is slightly under exposed. Given the 1/90 shutter speed shown in the EXIF data, it means that Christakis used the aperture priority mode of the M9. At night unluckily, the internal lightmeter often gets fooled by the various light sources, it is probably what happened in this instance.

Meaning / Mood / Feeling
Christakis titled this scene “February blues”. It illustrates one of the trap photographers often fall into. Is the title referring to the main subject depicted or to the photographer state of mind ? If it refers to the subject, then there is absolutely no element that sustain that the girl is in a “Blues mood”. She could actually be very happy, or simply hurried to get home. So watch out with the title you give to your shots, though obviously, it will always be the image that does most of the talking. As for the meaning of the picture itself, it is simply a scene of a probably cold rainy night. It is simple but effective, no need to always tell complex stories. Moreover, the picture stands as much for its general mood than the subject itself, I think Christakis depicted well the atmosphere of that night.

Opinion
On one side, the setting of the scene is well constructed both in terms of light and composition. The decorum was definitely there for a great street scene. I also feel the girl with the umbrella was a good choice of subject to include in this setting. Nevertheless, the shot kind of fails because of the position of the main subject. Probably by a step or two only. The left part of the picture is simply too dark and creates an unbalance with the right part. I wonder if increasing the exposure of the picture by half a stop and adding a further third of a stop to the left part of the picture could improve it. Maybe an experiment for Christakis to try.

Christakis started a street photography blog on Manchester a few months ago. Discover his daily pictures here.
Untitled by Khan


Canon 1000D with 17-50 2.8/f

Composition
This shot was probably taken as Khan walked by his subjects. I guess he raised his camera quickly to get as close as possible without being spotted. The resulting composition is very approximate. Indeed, the horizon line is bent and there is no real organization of the elements located  both in the first plane and the background. I would think that Khan got obnubilated by his central and good looking subject ;) This leads me to the point that one should always keep his attention on the background. This is often the difference between a good and great shot. Despite the unorganized background, Khan did include the typical British bus which in the case of this shot helps locate the action and adds a potential meaning to the shot.

Aesthetics
Khan probably shot this scene wide open to achieve selective focus on the girl located in the center of the frame. While selective focus is often a great tool to have one of the subjects stand out, I don’t think it was a wise decision to use it on this scene. Indeed, the picture is really about all the fellows dressed with the Argentinian football shirt, not only the girl in the center. Khan should have probably stopped down his lens to about F8.0 to get all subjects in focus. As for the exposure, it is spot on and the light is great. I also like the red and blue colors that were included in the frame, they are always interesting to work with. In this case, the red of the bus mixes well with the blue and white of the shirts.

Meaning / Mood / Feeling
Is this shot about a cute girl walking in the street or is it a disguised political message of the rivalry between Argentina and the UK ? Indeed, the Malvines war is only three decades old, so it could very well be an allusion to it. Or in other words, Argentinian beauty invades the streets of a UK city. If the shot was simply about a good-looking girl walking in the street (like suggested by the selective focus), then there is really no message to it and let’s call it a street portrait. Shooting attractive girls or boys in the street is very tricky because one often think that the picture will stand by itself just on the beauty of the subject. It might be true to the novice eyes but will result uninteresting to more expert  and scrutinizing eyes. Indeed, be it the composition, the light, the interaction or the mood, there must be more then a beautiful face in a picture.

Opinion
There is no doubt that Khan did spot a very interesting scene in the street, both in terms of subject and aesthetics. Yet it fails in most aspects, especially due to the approximate composition and selective focus. These shots are obviously very difficult to time correctly, there will always be a car, a passer-by in the background. Yet by giving as much attention to the background as one does to the key elements, one will frame having the whole picture in mind. It is no easy to achieve though and comes only with a lot of practice in the street. Still, I would suggest Khan to redress the horizon line in post processing, it will also frame tighter on the two girls and take out some of the distracting details (post and scarf on the left of the picture). The final output should still be a very pleasing street portrait.

Feb 262011
 

This week let’s have a look at two pictures taken in two very photogenic cities of Europe : Amsterdam and my dear Paris.

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Untitled by Stig Hammerstam


Sony A900 at 50mm at F5.0, 1/320, ISO640

Composition
Looking at the picture for the first time, I saw straight away that the dimensions were not the usual 24 x 36 one. In most case, it means that it is either a 4/3rd camera or it has been cropped. In the case of Stig’s shot, the EXIF data tells it was taken with a Sony A900 which is a full format DSLR. This basically means that Stig made some cropping in post-processing to adjust his composition. Some cropping is fine, but I personally prefer that whatever the crop, it keeps the original ratio. Not only will give more consistency to a series, but it will also help if you have plan to include within a book. This apart, the picture is well composed. It is cut in half diagonally and Stig made sure to include the end of the street, which gives a good impression of depth. The frames of the window as well as the poster girl does give a nice graphical composition. The elder woman is well positioned and it would have been difficult to take a better angle. Since Stig seems to have cropped his pictures, I would cut a bit of the poster frame on the right to leave out the very thin line of empty space. It would have also taken care of the very thin black line on the top right of the picture. These are details, but perfection is often in details. As for the very left part of the pictures, it is challenging to find a perfect cut of the words on the window without altering the rest of the frame. Note finally that the picture is slightly bent to the right, here again it could easily be remediated in post-processing.

Aesthetics
Stig chose a black and white conversion that fits well this picture. Some highlights are slightly burnt but it would be difficult to avoid in such a shot. Overall the medium contrast works great in this picture. According to the EXIF data, Stig used a 50mm lens (or had a zoom positioned at that focal length). This is a classic focal lens and many street photographers strolled around in Paris with that focal over the last century. The picture is extremely sharp, prowess due to the high pixel count of the A900 and a good lens. Good choice also on the aperture since by setting his lens at F5.0, Stig ensured great sharpness on the whole field, but still allowed some blur to give some Parisian lyric mood in the background. My main advice on this shot would be to give a slight localized exposure increase on the elder woman face. It is slightly too dark and does not allow to have a good read on her expression.

Meaning / Mood / Feeling

This is a type of shot that I like to call “Trompe l’oeil”. In other words, it plays with your vision by providing key elements in unusual dimensions, perspectives or types of support. Stig did a smart juxtaposition of the poster girl with the elder woman, both in terms of age, but also quantity of hair. This shot is probably about youth and decay. Another secondary message could be about the cost of living in Paris. Indeed the woman has to bend to have a look at the prices and there is almost a feel of scare in her eyes. At the same time, the poster located above the price shows a woman that seems to be laughing.

Opinion

Great composition and a good processing that could might be slightly be improved by recovering some of the burnt highlights. The message is clear and funny with a strong humanist touch. All in all, this is a classic Parisian street photography shot. A little exposure increase on the woman’s face together with a slightly tighter crop on the right and will be perfect. Congratulations.

Discover more of Stig’s photography by following this link.

“The sail dance” by Charles Janssen Schmidt.


Leica M6 with 35mm Summicron Asph, Ilford Delta 100

First let me state that it has been a difficult shot to critique. On one side, there is something very likeable about it at first sight; there is movement, joy and a great B&W development. On the other side, mainly details soon jumped to my eyes that bothered me a lot. So let’s go through my systematic analysis and see what comes out of it.

Composition
Charles used a Leica M6 with a 35mm lens. Taking vertical shots with a 35mm lens from close distance brings up a big difficult which is to keep the vertical lines right.They do not always have to be perfectly straight yet in this case, both the boats’ masts andbackground buildings lean to the right. This is further exaggerated by the body position of the male dancer that also points in the same direction. This perfectly illustrates how our vision is often influenced by the first plane of a shot. In this case, the framing should have been done by keeping an eye on the lines of building in the back. This being said, Charles did a good job with the position of the camera by allowing a good feel of the setting of the action. We can clearly see that it was taken within a city harbour and probably at an event. I like the central position of the girl, she is the star of the picture. Too bad a guy succeed to stick his head in between of the arms of our happy dancers, but I’ll come back to it. I’ll also come back to the backpack laying the first plane, yet I think it should either have been excluded from the picture (not easy in this composition) or fully included. Same applies to the feet of the dancer.

Aesthetics
This shot shows two things that I personally think ruin many 21st century photography. Backpacks and sneakers (or basketball shoes). They are not photogenic at all and it will completely take the glamour out of a shot. In Charle’s pictures we have 2 backpacks and two or three suspicious styles of shoes. I am obviously joking a bit, yet is shows one of the dilemna of street photography in some scenes. Do you favour its documentary function or do you want it aesthetically pleasing ? To me backpack ruin pictures (especially the Italians colorful ones), yet at the same time they are contemporary items and should not systematically be ignored. In some ways, the backpack in the first plane could have been left in the frame to give a sense of a little dance break. Yet I would have done everything to leave the one shown in the background because it is to me the key picture breaker. Another way to take care of it would be to use a larger aperture and blur the background, yet Charles probably set an aperture of F8-F11 to allow a read on any single details. As for the general look of the picture, there is the right amount of contrast, though I would simply put some more exposure time to the girl’s body. This is not that easy to do in the lab I guess. Finally, let’s mention the wonderful shape of the flying dress. Charles allowed a lot of dynamism in this shot by selecting a low shutter speed, great choice.

Meaning / Mood / Feeling

The meaning is crystal clear, that is a couple enjoys a dance in a harbor. The mood is happy, it seems to be an event where people are enjoying themselves. It is clearly a contemporary shot, the backpack and clothing leave no doubt about it.

Opinion
The shot is dynamic and brings a sense of happiness. It is pleasing to look at and brought me smile, no doubt about that. It is a good document of life in our times. I am sure that 50 years from now, many people will look at it with a nostalgia look. “Where shoes and backpacks really this way back in 2010 grandfather ?” could very well heard in the future. Nevertheless, the guy looking towards the dancer in the background bothers me somehow. He breaks the union and at the same time his body posture doesn’t really introduce some sort of interaction with the couple. All in all, these kind of shots taken at events are always very difficult since so much is going on. It is complex to analyze every single detail and position them correctly. Using a large aperture is often the easy way yet it sometimes take key elements of a picture by blurring them. The only way to keep both the large depth of view and eliminate some of the unaesthetic elements would have to have come close and shoot upwards. (Sorry Charles, but I just can’t get my eyes out of that backpack ;) )

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Feb 162011
 

For this week column, let’s head back to Europe and analyze work from photographers located in Germany and Austria.

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Untitled by Konstantin Mihailov

Leica M8 with Voigtlander 50mm 1.1, at F1.1, 1/3000, ISO160

Compostion
Konstantin’s picture has a panoramic structure as the key elements all happen within a thin central band. A crop would definitely work here though I know most people like to remain with the original field of view of their picture, which is fine. There are three key elements in that picture, a man walking, a couple kissing and another man sitting on their right. I like how they are positioned though I would have preferred to have the man sitting on the right fully included in the field of view. Indeed, the main subject is the couple, yet the man being half cut distracts a bit away from them. Indeed I couldn’t help wondering why he was cut out. I think Konstantin should have included entirely in the frame as he is an essential to its reading. Konstantin took the shot with a rangefinder so  perhaps his initial intent was not to include that man as he is positioned roughly in the area corresponding to the camera’s safety factor. Anyways, that man still makes the picture more interesting, so it is good to have at least a bit of him. As for the couple, great timing here, the kiss is just perfect. Note the great interaction between the subjects as the two men look towards the couple, bringing further the attention towards them. Finally, remember to watch out for your reflection in the windows when you shoot … I am not sure it is Konstantin that I see in the back, but it could be ;)

Aesthetics
According to the Exif data, the shot was taken wide open. It does show as the foreground is slightly blurred as well as the man on the left. When I face situations like this one with a wall behind my main subjects, I usually tend to stop down my lens for a longer depth of field. Indeed, there will be no background blur so there is no real advantage to shoot with a large aperture. Konstantin might have chosen the large aperture for the special look it provides yet I usually find that that special looks are not enough to offset the problem of the thin depth of field it might bring to a shot. In this case, the man on the left is slightly blurred, not because of a low shutter speed but because it is not within the acceptable focus line. Not a big deal but something to keep in mind when you shoot wide open. Focus is spot on on the two lovers, good job since it is never easy to focus and shoot quickly with a rangefinder at that kind of aperture.
Konstantin used a Silver efex for the post processing which is very high contrast. Here it seems a question of preferences, but I find it a bit heavy on the dark. Indeed the shot has few tonalities and large pans of black almost give it an oppressive feel. Is it adecuate for a topic as light as love ? I guess Konstantin wanted to fully isolate his subjects from the surrounding to have the viewer focus on the three key elements. It does work doing so but a bit to the expense of the picture’s finesse. Another positive aspect of Konstantin’s processing is how the frame of the windows in the background appear to break a bit the horizontal composition. It also adds a mystery touch to the picture.  Lastly, remember that both heels should preferrably be on the ground when you shoot walking subjects, it always improves the picture when the legs form a perfect triangle and give a clear reading on the person’s whereabouts.

Meaning / mood / feeling
This is a light and easy scene to read. Two lovers kiss under the eyes of passer-bys. One of two men almost has an envious look while the other is laughing. It shows some of the many reaction of humankind towards love. There is no ambiguity on the meaning of this shot, just a pleasant urban scene about love. Sometimes the simplest things are the best.

Opinion.
I would have really liked to have the man on the right fully included in the frame to clearly close that love triangle. I also think the post processing is a bit too strong on the darks. This apart, timing was almost perfect, the message is clear and Konstantin triggered at the perfect time. A decisive moment shot I would say. I would suggest Konstantin to try a panoramic version of this picture, it would probably look great printed this way.

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Untitled by Axel Cordes

As an introductory comment, Axel asked me whether pictures taken within museum count as street photography ? The answer is in my opinion yes, provided there is an interaction between a human element and the museum setting.


Canon 5D with Zeiss 35mm ZE F2.0 at F2.0, 1/400, ISO400

Composition
Axel’s topic is quite unusual and allowed for creative framing. Round shapes are obviously not always easy to include in a rectangular frame of view. By centering the artwork, I think Axel took a good decision as it creates equidistant lines to the border of the frame. I wonder though if it would not have been even better to include the full circle in the frame. Indeed by leaving the lower part out, it almost feels like Axel did not go the full way of his original creative intend. As for the woman’s position, it respects the geometry of the picture since she located in the center of the picture. Note that her head is the center point of the circle, very smart choice from Axel here.

Aesthetics.
The main problem when shooting artwork in street photography is to avoid making it the key aesthetic element of your picture. Indeed, it sometimes feels like the photographer relies on the skill of an other artist to make its picture interesting. In Axel’s picture I don’t think it is the case since the woman and the circle create an association where both subjects are of equal importance. At the same time, both elements seem to melt in each other since they use roughly the same color tones. I am not expert in colors, but I feel the red and brown tones in this picture bring a feeling of coziness, probably emphasized by the coat of the woman. I also like a lot how the blond hair of the woman brings contrast to the red and brown tones. Same can be said of her scarf which brings a different shape, almost like a fluid flowing from the circle’s center. I also liked the detail in the woman’s hair as well as her square shaped earring, I think it might tell about her personality.  Finally, I think there is a slight under exposure on the shot. I would suggest Axel to increase it by a half to a full stop to bring some more pop to the picture.

Meaning / mood / feeling.
This is a very difficult shot to interpret meaning wise. The color of the circle reminds me some of Rothko’s work, which was known to spend hours in front of his paintings in contemplation. Did Axel follow this line of idea ? There is no element to sustain it but that leads me to the main issue with that picture which is the woman’s behavior. What is she doing ? I looked at this picture for a long time and could not get a clear reading on her expression and attitude. Is she lost in her thoughts ? Is she looking at the paint texture ? Has she a hard time understanding the meaning of the painting ? Several interpretations can be given to that scene yet none seems more evident than the others. Evidently, the choice can be left to the viewer. Yet I usually like when the meaning of a picture is pretty straight forward, even if it requires a very meticulous read of the picture.

Opinion
In terms of composition and aesthetics, I think Axel did a great job. Add a bit more exposure and this will be a very pleasant picture to look at. I wonder how it would have looked framed slightly wider, encompassing the full circle and maybe even part of her legs. My main regret is that Axel wasn’t able to record more precisely the woman’s state of mind or behavior. The goal of street photography is not to depict the truth, it is impossible, yet to give enough elements to the viewer to come up with his own interpretation. Here I am left in between, I could not come up with my own story. I’d love to know though what was Axel’s interpretation of the woman’s behavior.

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Feb 092011
 

Today let’s look at two shots coming from the US, let’s stop first on Hollywood Boulevard before we proceed on to Chicago.

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Untitled by Sergey Shakarian


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Composition
Sergey’s shot is a classic street scene composed following the rule of thirds. There is depth in the shot, which is always good, and the trapezoid shape of the street leads the eyes of the viewer towards the girl and the flow of the traffic. The line of stars also point to the end of the street which adds futher to the depth. Also notice how the girl’s shadow falls within the frame, well composed here again. I am a bit bothered by the fact that the action on the right of the frame is partially cut, I think the couple could have been part of the picture’s story. The point of view elected was pretty low (shot from the hip) but still Sergey managed to keep the horizon line straight, good job here as it is often very challenging when using this shooting technique (or was it adjusted in post-processing ?).

Aesthetics
There is a problem here that jumps straight to my eyes: burnt highlights. I don’t usually mind when the sky is burnt as it is often difficult to avoid it in high contrast scenes like this one. Yet, I feel the main subject has to be well exposed which is not the case in this shot. Indeed the girls’s hair, her shirt and arms have noticeable blown highlights, which instantly gives a digital look to the scene. I doubt Sergey would be able to recover all the burn highlights in post processing but I would tone down slightly the exposure, maybe half a stop. As for the colors, it is all about the girl and I like her blue shirt as well as her multi color bag. Tt makes it visually appealing and emphasizes clearly on who is the star of the picture.

Meaning/Mood/Feeling
This picture shows one of the dilemma you will face in street photography. Whenever you encounter a potentially  interesting subject (and that girl was a pretty good subject), you can either go for the street portrait shot, or include your “portrait” in a street shot. I would define a street portrait as a close-up where the subject is the main part of the field of view. Usually, some of the subject’s environment can be seen but the expression and look of the person portrayed are the key elements of the picture. In this case, Sergey opted to portray the girl as one element of a street scene. The question becomes then, how does the environment and the girl connect in this picture? Or in other words, why did Sergey frame the shot so widely ? The element critical to the scene were in my opinion the girl, the stars, the Palm trees and the boy on the right. I would therefore have framed more on the right to include the girl that looks like his companion. All other key components would have remained in the frame. Finally, see how the boy’s look is pointed towards the photographer … a second later it would probably have gone towards the girl. Imagine then the result : a boy peeks out at the girl while his girlfriend looks away … all of the sudden all the elements connect between them.

Opinion
Sergey’s shot has a sound composition and he did record an interesting pause from the girl. Yet the shot is a bit too digital looking due to burnt highlights and I don’t feel all elements connect between them as good as they could have. This illustrates the complexity of street photography. In a second you must compose, expose well and take special attention to all details, preferably before being spotted. This was a tough shot to make work and I think Sergey got it half right. The choice to frame wide was the correct one but the camera was pointed slight too leftwards. This illustrates somewhat why I am not a big fan of hip shots, framing will never be as precise as when you raise your camera to your eyes.

Untitled by Erin Girard from Chicago

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Composition
Erin included a subject in the first plane of his shot. This is the trademark of some great photographers such as Jason Elenaski or Eric Bouvet. Yet it is a very difficult way to compose since you a slight movement from your subject might throw him out of the frame. Also, that first plane purpose is usually to either have an interaction with the second plane or add aesthetically to the picture. In this instance, I think both the position and the composure of the boy in the first plane are interesting. Looking at the shot, I get the feeling that the shot was taken a bit approximatively, maybe on the fly or maybe from the hip. The horizon line is bent which can add dynamism to certain shots. In this case, it does not serve the purpose, but maybe it was just unplanned for.

Aesthetics
Again in this shot, I get too much the feel of digital. There seems to be very little dynamic range on this snapshot and exposure is off. To Erin’s discharge, it was a tough one due to the very high contrast between the left and right part of the image. Maybe a localized exposure adjustment could have deal with it and unify a bit more the two sides of the picture. The focus point was very close to the photographer therefore the picture is blurry right after the subject on the left. This results in a background where people’s expressions are blurry and does not allow an interpreation of the second plane subjects’ expressions. Except for the boy’s T-shirt, the color space is a bit dull, probably due to the mis-exposure.

Meaning / Mood / Feeling
I looked a long time at this picture but could not find a meaning to it, even less a feeling. The whole shot stands only on the boy in the first plane. His attitude and look are interesting, but what is doing, why is he looking this way ? And more important, how does he connect to his environment. A market merchant ? A man passing-by ? The rest of the frame does not bring any more clues, nor mood as no elements connect to the main subject, either in terms of action or aesthetically.

Opinion
Kudos to Erin to have tried an unconventional framing. The boy’s attitude and his position could have been the part of a great picture. Yet, the rest fails in many regards, be it technically, aesthetically and above all, in terms of message or feeling conveyed. I personally don’t use the first plane technique a lot, because it is extremely difficult to visualize and anticipate. I would advice Erin to experiment a bit more with it, this could be part of one’s style. Another way to take this kind of shots is to focus beyond the first plane. Indeed Erin could have focused on the boy sitting in the back which would have resulted in a blurred foreground. This effect works sometimes great and is used by many professionals. The shot I just posted today gives you an idea on how to use this effect.

You can discover more of Erin’s pictures by following this link.

And remember, this is just my opinion, the one that counts most is ultimately yours !